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My pink whispering

My pink whispering
is a smear -

a delicate underwater symphony
black and white
shadow goddess
smooth as honey.

True beauty is sad,
red still -

You always eat
gorgeous love,
a thousand essential
screams a day.


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'a thousand essential screams a day.' that line is giving me goosebumps.

surfed here from Rhian's comments. This is my first ride on the poetry train: http://joystory.blogspot.com/2007/05/monday-poetry-train-1.html

oooooh - nice! i liked this alot:
"black and white
shadow goddess
smooth as honey."

Christine that was gorgeous. Sensual and smooth. I got goosebumps reading it!!! WONDERFUL SWEETIE! Don't make us wait too much for more. =)

That's graceful and beautiful and so powerful. Thank you, Christine, for posting it!

Wow, wow, wow! I'm going to need a cold shower after that one -- what a beautiful and sensual and powerful poem! I love the images you paint and the feelings you evoke with your words.